At least at the moment, I'm not going to bother to write a lot of setting exposition, so we'll start roughly in what would be Chapter 2 of a normal Eden RPG book.  Here, we'll take a brief run-through of attributes, skills, and existing Qualities and Drawbacks.  New Qualities and Drawbacks will be in part 3.  (Yes, Virginia, there is a Gargoyles Quality.  There's probably a Santa Claus, too, but we'll talk about him under the Fey later on.)
 
Attributes - nothing much needs to change about Attributes.
 
Skills - the standard Cinematic Unisystem skill list works just fine for the Gargoyles world.  Occultism clues you in on the secret history of the world, and lets you know about magic and the faeries.
 
Qualities - ah yes, here's the meat of the thing.
 
Attractiveness - The current system, elegant in its simplicity, lumps all matters of personal appearance into the Attractiveness Quality.  So a Gargoyle might start off with -3 Attractiveness to represent his inhuman appearance, but could then buy it up as far as he wanted.  Goliath, who's got a way with the ladies, might have spent 5 points or so to get an effective Attractiveness of 2.
 
I don't really like that.  It's okay in Buffy or Angel, where most of the characters are human, but in a Gargoyles game, it's very possible that all the PCs will be Gargoyles, so it's a little wonky.  I'm seriously considering splitting Attractiveness into two Qualities/Drawbacks.  One would measure your aesthetic Attractiveness, and the other would measure your deviation from human norms.  "Fearsomeness" would be a Drawback that makes your basic form scary/ugly to humans.  It'd give you a negative modifier to Influence tests not based on fear, no matter how high your Attractiveness is - except for dealing with people who are used to your unusual form in some way.  For them, your Attractiveness kicks in.  Possibly rather than all or nothing, the two add/subtract from one another, so a Gargoyle with -3 Fearsomeness and +1 Attractiveness is only two points scary on first impressions.
 
When I get to the point of writing up characters, I'll decide whether to adopt this or not, but I think it makes a neat alternate rule.
 
Enchanted/Superscience item - The relatively high tech level of the Gargoyles setting means that 1-2 point items are frequently not worth paying for with Quality points.  They can just be purchased with sufficient wealth or obtained through Organizations.  Higher-level items should still be bought for 2 points per PL.
 
Optionally, something that would be incredibly expensive like a battlesuit (Which is really several PL 4-ish items all mushed together) can be purchased as a Supernatural package Quality.  The Dual Form Drawback is appropriate to represent the fact that you can't walk around in your battlesuit all the time.

As I've mentioned, I think there's an Eden-approved method for this in All Tomorrow's Zombies.  It involves buying the Robot Quality and whatever add-ons you'd like.  That seems workable to me.  
 
Enchanting/Superscience - Enchanting is completely gone.  Mortal magicians can create potions and charms through a variety of spells, through the Sorcery quality.  More powerful items are purely the purview of the Third Race.
 
Superscience is easier than it is in Buffy.  Superscience devices no longer require special ingredients.  Money works.  This will be discussed more completely later on.  Your Superscience Quality can never be a higher level than your Science skill, and you should probably really have Science of at least 4 before you pick up Superscience.  6 would be better.  We're probably going to talk about new uses of Superscience to cover metagenetics and cybernetics.
 
Occult Library - I think Occult Library works just fine as-is.
 
Rank - Rank now explicitly buys up your standing in an Organization, granting you more autonomy (but also more responsibility).  We'll talk more about Organizations when I get into new Qualities/Drawbacks.  You can have Rank in several groups.  For instance, an undercover police investigator might have rank in the Police and in an organized crime ring.  Almost all Illuminati members also have Rank in some other group.  In fact, that's frequently why they were recruited into the Illuminati.
 
Robot - The Robot Quality from Buffy is a decent starting point for any robotic characters, but there's no reason to limit yourself so.  Instead, build Robots like Demons and Supernatural characters from Angel.  Robots can have Drawbacks like Beholden from Armageddon (which I might list down in the next part, for simplicity sake).  They could also have variations of Antisocial Tendencies, Mental Problems, Emotional Problems and the like to represent programming imperatives.
 
Cyborgs work pretty much the same way, except they can recover (depending on how many cybernetic parts they have) 75%, 50%, or 25% of their Life Points without a Mr. Fix-it test.  Cyborgs who are nothing but a brain in a robot body work just like normal robots.  Drawbacks like Cruel are appropriate to represent the dehumanizing effect of losing so much of your essential humanity.  (Then again, Jackal and Hyena were already pretty twisted)
 
Sorcery - Sorcery works as-is, except that I'd drop it to 3-points per level and remove the TK.  Pretty much only Faeries have Sorcery, and some of them might instead have 2-point per level Magic Domains, which are pretty much Invocations as per the conversion rules in the Magic Box.
 
Vampire - no Vampires have shown up in Gargoyles, thus far.  If they do, the existing Vampire Quality probably won't really work for them, but do whatever you want with your own game.
 
Wealth - Wealth, at high levels, gives you free levels of the Organization Quality.  At level 4, you get 5 Organization points.  At level 5, you get 10.  Beyond level 5, Wealth would start to describe the resources of nations.  Characters might actually be that rich (like David Xanatos), but level 5 represents the limit of their liquid assets, so this Quality is capped at 5.  (To keep the Director sane, really)
 
Supernatural Qualities - Note that many Supernatural Qualities are appropriate for Demifey, Mutates, and Cyborgs.
 
Natural Attack - New to this Quality is an Armor-Piercing kicker for 2 points.  It'll probably work with Supernatural Attack, too, but I'd be more hesitant to apply it.
 
Supernatural Senses - New to this Quality is night-vision, costing 1 point.
 
Okay, so I think that does it for existing Qualities.  Next up are the new ones.
 
Magical Conduit (2-point per level Quality)
A Magical Conduit is a mystical artifact that allows a human to freely work magic.  Each level of Focus allows a non-Sorcerer to Quick-Cast spells of a power level up to the level of the Quality.  A would-be magician can only control a Conduit of a strength equal to or less than his Occultism level.  Otherwise, his spells have the chance to go seriously awry - using the miscast rules in Buffy.  A Magical Conduit is essentially an enchanted item, and can be lost.  
 
Magery (1-point per level Quality)
Magery provides bonus points on Sorcery checks.  The maximum rating of this Quality is 5 levels.
 
Organization (Variable Quality)
The Organization Quality provides a character (or characters, it is possible to pool levels) additional Organization points.
 
Supernatural Qualities - Supernatural Qualities are possessed by such creatures as Gargoyles, Demifey, Mutates, and Cyborgs.  To create such a character, you build a package Quality by picking the positive and negative traits you want to be intrinsic to your character's "race."  (In the case of a cyborg or mutate, it might be a race consisting of a single creature, of course.  Each demifey might be unique, as well)
 
Extra Limb - Variable Quality
You have one or more extra prehensile limbs.  Extra feet don't really cost you anything.  This Quality doesn't grant you any additional actions, but it can allow your actions to affect more people.  If you had, say, ten tentacles, you might be able to grab ten people a few at a time and hold/crush them all.
 
One limb costs you 1 point.  2 to 4 additional limbs cost 2 points.  5 or more cost 5 points.  In practical terms, 10 limbs is probably a good limit to this Quality.  Extensible limbs that significantly increase your reach add a 1-point kicker if you can reach about 10 feet (3 meters or so), and 2 points if you want to be able to reach even further.  And at some point you're just getting silly.  Particularly at the higher levels, your limbs don't have to be static limbs.  An amorphous mass that can extend multiple tendrils might vary from no limbs up to ten, depending on his mood.
 
Magical Affinity (2-point per level Quality)
Each level of Magical Affinity gives you a +1 bonus on Sorcery tests, up to a maximum of 5.  Unlike Buffy Sorcery, there is no progressive spell-casting penalty, so there is no point in taking this Quality beyond 5 levels.  The prerequisite for this Quality is Sorcery.
 
Special Movement (Variable Quality)
This Quality imparts more freedom of movement.  Characters can have more than one type.  For instance, Gargoyles have the first level of Climbing, and Gliding, for 3 total points and pretty much as much freedom of movement as someone who can just fly.
Climbing: 1 point for climbing with claws/special gear.  2 points for spider-like wall-crawling that lets you hang from the ceilings as well as scaling the walls and climb smooth surfaces easily.
Flight 3: points for flight that can be easily disrupted (like with wings), 5 points for freeier flight.
Gliding/swinging: 2 points.  It's pretty much just the lower level of Flight.
Leaping: the ability to make prodigious vertical or horizontal leaps.  2 points.
 
Superspeed (2-point per level Quality)
Superspeed lets a character move really quickly.  It's generally tied to a single type of movement, like running, swimming, or flying, depending on the character.  Each level of Superspeed more or less doubles the character's maximum speed.  At level 3, the character can move as fast as a car in the city.  At 4, he's approaching race-car speeds, and at 5, he's... well, really fast.  Superspeed doesn't allow any extra attacks.  For that, you're going to want obnoxiously high Dexterity.

I think that covers new Qualities.  I was planning to do Packages as part of this post, but it's getting late tonight and I still have some work to do on them.  I'll do them next.  Really, you don't HAVE to have package qualities to start using this stuff, so I don't feel too bad about leaving you waiting.

Hey everybody,

I just did a really cool panel for Domino Girls, which you will get to see in several weeks.  But I liked one particular part of it enough that I also did a sketch I've decided to share.

I should sketch more.  I should do a lot of things more, for that matter.  But since that's not very likely, you'll just have to enjoy Phoebe: schoolgirl from Hell.

An error with the blog yesterday seems to have been resolved - probably through the tireless efforts of Tim Rayburn.  Or maybe it was just one of those things.

Either way, I don't know if my hordes of subscribers (okay 6) got their RSS feeds, so I figured I'd throw out an announcement.

I figured I'd start with the hardest part first.  Well, that's not strictly true.  I have most of the other parts worked out already, but magic is a toughie, and some of the other stuff hinges on how it works.

Buffy magic is a very robust system, but it doesn't fit the Gargoyles flavor.  Buffy Sorcerers have an entirely diferent set of problems than Gargoyles ones.  The high probability of spells going awry doesn't really fit, and the progressive -2 per turn seems a little off, too.

All we know about magic comes from Demona, the Magus, the Archmage, and various faeries.  And really, there's not a lot.  Normal humans hardly ever cast spells (compared to the amount of time they spend doing other stuff).  Faeries, on the other hand, sling magic around all the time, although it does seem to wear them out after a while.

For humans and gargoyles, the rule seems to be that it's very hard to cast spells spontaneously.  The Magus only ever does it once, and he dies from it.  I think the Archemage throws around some nasty spells, but it's been a while since I've watched it.  I'm going to go with the assumption that for the most part, magic in Gargoyles is through rituals, or through using magical devices.  For instance, it was likely a property of Titania's Mirror that Demona could use a simple ritual to summon Puck - rather than a "spell" of Demona's.

EDIT:  Something else I've thought of

One thing I might change, although I'd do so with some trepidation, is to make spell formulas a little more flexible.  Spell R&D is pretty hard.  If your books don't have a spell for turning people into statues, you're probably never going to be able to turn people into statues.  But if your books DO have a spell for turning people into statues, you can probably turn one person into a statue, or a dozen, or a million if you're good enough to marshal the magical energies.  And you can do so under different circumstances, like "the next person I touch" or "everyone in the sound of my voice."

What this means is that the spells you know are listed with their minimal effect and starting PL, and you can pick and choose modifiers.  Make the spell work longer or faster or bigger, and the PL goes up.  Make it take rare ingredients or year-long rituals, and it goes down.

That's a scary level of freedom, though.  I've already learned that WitchCraft style Invocations are frighteningly poweful, and those just let a magician do one kind of effect.  So I'll have to think about it.  Sometimes play balance has to win over simulation of the source material.

So anyway, the Sorcery quality is really, really rare.  Human magicians learn rote spells and need either elaborate rituals or a magical conduit to work their mojo.  A magical conduit is an Enchanted Item that - just to keep things simple - provides the holder with the ability to Quick Cast spells up to its Power Level.  It doesn't provide the bonus points.  Instead, that's going to be a Quality called - because I like GURPS - Magery.  Levels of Magery up to 5 add to your Occultism skill to cast spells.  Since I'm already dinging you at roughly 2 points per level for Quick Casting, I'll just make that Quality a 1-point per level Quality.  And if you want Telekinesis, you have to pay for it the old-fashioned way.

I think I'll leave Sorcery in, but make the prerequisite for learning it be something like Occultism greater than 10.  And I might turn it into a sort of "Wild Card Skill" so it advances a lot more slowly.

On the other hand, Gargoyles magicians don't seem to have too much trouble with spells going awry.  A spell can fail if you're not talented enough to cast it, and what it's supposed to do might not actually be what you think it does, but it's not going to do something radically different.  Magic seems very legalistic.  A spell to make you as enduring as the mountain stones may just turn you to stone.

(Although I have a private theory that if Xanatos had immersed himself in the cauldron, it would have made him immortal - he would have shed his stone skin like a Gargoyle.  I think Puck didn't want Xanatos to be immortal because then  he'd be stuck as Owen for all eternity, so he did something to scare Xanatos off.  Greg Wiesman doesn't actually agree with me, but what does he know?)

Faeries have it different.  They seem to be able to just whip out with spells that do just about anything at the drop of a hat.  They also DO seem to suffer from some degradation of their powers.  Puck says he'll need a long nap after The Mirror.

Ergo, Faeries DO have Sorcery, which costs 5 points per level and lets them Quick Cast spells.  I'll keep the Quality at 5 points per level even though it doesn't include telekinesis because it will include the ability to improvise spells.  Faeries just whip out with the magic whenever they want.

I'm also making one other major change - Magic can kill you.  If you throw a Quick Cast spell of a higher PL than your Sorcery or available conduit, you take physical damage from it.  I think I'll make it five times the PL of the spell.  That'll REALLY limit what magicians can do without their tools.

Faeries can also have other powers.  In fact, not all faeries or demifey need to have Sorcery.  They might rely on innate powers that are more reliable, if less versatile.  For those, the Angel supernatural Qualities will do most of the job.

So then there's Enchanting and Superscience.

Magic items are really rare in the Gargoyles-verse, and most of the ones I can think of are actually Faerie creations: the Eye of Odin, Titania's Mirror, the Phoenix Gate, and probably Excalibur.  The Grimorium is something of an unknown, as is the Gae Bolga.  I think I might limit Enchanting either to just level 1 for humans, or entirely to Faeries.  Or maybe not.  There's a dearth of evidence on the subject.

Superscience, on the other hand, should be easier than it is in the Buffyverse.  Robots, blasters, floating factories, and whatnot are all common enough not to raise eyebrows, even if they're not ubiquitous.  So Superscience works as written - you have to have a high Science skill to have it, and it costs 5 points per level.  The only difference is that Superscience gadgets no longer require a special ingredient.  Instead, rare ingredients can lower the effective Power Level like they do for Sorcery spells.

And I think that covers everything magic-related.  We're going to discuss a slightly different way to approach the Enchanted Item Quality a little later on.  It works okay for some devices, but is really bad for things like exo-armor.

If I get my hands on All Tomorrow's Zombies before I write the next segment, I'll see what Eden did for battle suits there.  I think they went with a variation of the Robot Quality, which probably works pretty well.

Here's a sketch of Reliquary herself, with limbs and a head.

I'm not sure about the mask.  Among other things, I think she probably has a public identity, making a mask that isn't body armor kind of silly.  She'll have other variations of the costume, too.  I have a sketch around here somewhere loosely based on Kim Possible's fighting outfit, and another one that's a more traditional superhero costume.  This one is somewhat inspired by a picture of Mary Marvel in a Black Adam version of her costume that looked kinda cool.

Two quick pieces from a really nifty Mutants & Masterminds PBP I'm playing on rpg.net.

First, a mockup of the logo for my character, Reliquary.  (She is not a floating, headless torso in game - I just wanted to see what the logo would look like, so I did a quick body to sketch it on)

Second, my completely misinformed version of what Robert Edwards' character, Spitfire, would look like.  Except she doesn't, since his idea of "short hair" and mine are different.

(That said, I gave her anime hair.  IRL it'd be shorter than I drew it - just not a crew-cut like he imagined.  And he gets to be right, since it's his character)




Now, I really need to get some more gaming content on this blog.  I'll see if I can find time for more Gargoyles this weekend.

So, we're going into issue 2 of Domino Girls now.  Issue 1 runs 26 pages, of which the current one is page 17, I believe.  I'd actually like to be further ahead than that, but I don't always get what I want.

There are a few things changing, which will become apparent once you all start seeing the new pages.  One of them is that I'm trying a little harder on the art.  I'm getting a bit faster, which has let me spend more time making each panel look nicer.  Also, daily practice has probably made me a bit better than I was when I started late last year.

So anyway, I had this idea for how to render a particular scene, and before I started it, I dashed off a quick sketch.  The drawing is very simplified, with just vague shapes instead of any kind of well-rendered figures.  I just wanted to see how the composition and shading would look.

(Which probably won't stop Lisa from complaining about Phoebe's hair.  But hey, at least Phoebe got legs.  Diana is just a hovering torso and head with one arm.)

One thousand years ago, Superstition and the sword ruled...

I am a raving Gargoyles fanboy.  I loved the cartoon, enjoyed the Gargoyles Saga fan-fiction project (which I should probably look in on again one of these days.  I'm a fickle raving fanboy), and am really enjoying the new comic.  Freed from the bounds of a kid's show, Gargoyles is really coming into its own.

I am also a raving Unisystem fanboy.

I think you see where this is going.

Tweaking the Unisystem rules so they'll work for the Gargoyles universe isn't going to be all that big a job, but it'll give me something to post about for a few weeks.  I'm going to do it piecemeal here, and maybe at the end I'll write it all up nice and put it in a PDF.

First off, let's look at what we're doing.  While you /could/ just write up a Gargoyle Quality and call it good, you wouldn't really have done everything right.  Sorcery needs some work, as does Superscience, and the Gargoyels setting has some slightly different underpinnings than the Buffyverse.  Getting that extra bit of harmony is what will make this take longer than a few paragraphs.

Here's what I have in mind:

Magic - Magicians in the Gargoyles universe need spellbooks - not just for learning spells, but for casting them.  On the other hand, they can improvise spells very rapidly.  The Occult Library Quality and the Sorcery rules are in for a change.  Beyond that, there are some rules about magic in Gargoyles that I want to get right.

Enchanting - Nobody in the Gargoyles universe seems to produce magic items except the Faeries.  Assemblages seem to be okay, though.  So Enchanting is probably going to be limited to 1 level - or perhaps just folded into whatever Sorcery turns into.

Superscience - Giant floating factories, robots, battle armor, black-market blasters... the Gargoyles universe has a lot of high technology that people don't really bat an eye at.  It's going to take some work to get all that right.

Organizations - Private armies and secret societies are a big part of the Gargoyles setting.  The Organization rules in Angel are an okay start, but they don't really make any provision for characters like Xanatos or the higher-ups in the Illuminati (whoever they are).  I'll probably do something with the Rank and Wealth Qualities, and possibly build a new Organization Quality that will let characters buy Organization points.

New Qualities - Obviously, there's going to be a Gargoyle racial package.  Cyborgs, Mutates, and other strangeness will also make appearances.  An outright Faerie is possibly too powerful for a PC, but half-fey like Fox will be within reasonable limits.  And I'll give lesser Faeries a try, too.  But no player is going to get to play Thor.  Just don't ask.

Archetypes - Particularly if I decide to wrap this all up in a shiny PDF wrapper, I'll want to do some archetypes.  Gargoyles is a setting that runs to Champions more than Investigators.  The less competent characters are generally bit players.  That doesn't mean you have to play your game that way, though, so I may throw in some lower-end characters, too.

I'm trying to do one Blog post per week, more or less, so you'll see something here soon.